We had our technical viewing with Sam today. He was there to help us with any editing we were struggling with but also gave great feedback on the idea and if we followed the story or not.
Feedback from Sam
- Have shots of team to build up Jason's introduction as it's difficult to see who Jason is.
- The shutter was left on so there is a weird light rolling down behind Ed, this cannot be changed but it's not too prominent so just a future thought.
- He understood the story which was a main concern of mine
- He thought we should have graphics of famous footballers promoting the fact they're not gay
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