Wednesday 23 November 2016

STORYTELLING: Screenwriter Research

For a part of the story-telling unit we had to research two screenwriters. For this I chose Neil Cross and Allan Cubitt. 

Neil Cross

Neil Cross is the screenwriter and creator for Luther (2010), he has also written the film Mama (2013) and Crossbones (2014). Cross has really progressed throughout his life, from nothing to an award winning screenwriter and producer, and developed his work massively during this time to bigger and better TV shows and films.

Neil started writing in dirty bedsits when he was young. Slowly he progressed and he wrote Carrie, his first novel on a manual typewriter that didn’t have a working “S” button. At this time, he was living in a caravan with his wife and two children. He wrote it with the typewriter on his knees in the toilet and when he had finished a page he used to take it out and write in the “S” with a pen. The book made him quite a bit of money, with which he brought a big house with an office. However, even when he was stuck on what to write he would go find a horrible corner somewhere and sit there, bringing him back to his memories of writing in the caravan toilet. At one point in his life, Cross thought he had all his ideas that he would ever have. He thought he was done and wouldn’t write again, which was obviously his writer’s block talking. He knew it was hard to work from home with his children around so he tried to keep his work life as well-organised as possible. As he started so low with hardly even a roof over his head, Cross knew that working as a writer was a very privileged position and he never took it for granted.


The very first episode of Luther is about John Luther returning to work as a DCI after a 7-month suspension. He investigates a home invasion which resulted in two murders. The bodies were found by their daughter Alice. Luther questions her and even though she protests her innocence he is sure it was her who killed them. However, they cannot find the murder weapon, the gun. Alice is very intelligent and is prepared to play psychological games with Luther, meanwhile, he is trying to patch things up at home. The way that Cross has written this first episode can relate to my script in a few ways. However, the first major difference is that it is the male as the detective and a female as the suspect and psychopath. But this doesn’t change the fact that both her and my character, Joseph, are clever in which they can play with the detectives. For example, when Joseph hides the tights and tips off the detective, he is being clever and eliminating himself from the crime as he knows they have no evidence to tie the tights and himself together. The way that the viewer in Luther can believe that Luther is onto Alice is the same with my film in which the viewer thinks Miranda, the detective, is going to catch Joseph out when he is in for questioning. Both the first episode of Luther and my short film play with the viewers and keep them on their toes throughout. This is clever screenwriting on Cross’ behalf and I am happy that I have tried to create a script where the viewer thinks they know where they’re going with it and then they don’t.

Allan Cubitt


Allan Cubitt was the screenwriter and creator of The Fall (2013), the TV drama series that I based my film on. He is also well-known for The Boys Are Back (2009) and Sherlock Holmes and the Case of the Silk Stocking. (2004).

The Fall became very popular as the series went on throughout the three seasons. By the end of the last season, viewers had their eyes glued to the screen. Cubitt got the idea of his main character, the serial killer Paul Spector, when Russell Williams was arrested in Canada in February 2010 for breaking, entering and shoplifting which then escalated to killing. The character of Williams is what Cubitt wanted his killer to be like. Cubitt decided to write The Fall to explore the fact of violence against women. To be able to write about a serial killer Cubitt was able to find them interesting in a way. During The Fall he was able to look at the psychology of a person capable of killing someone in detail, this is why we find out who the killer is at the beginning, he purposely showed us who the killer was. This idea would have been difficult to explore if he had kept the killer a secret.


Cubitt is able to make Spector seem so dark and devious in some parts and other parts he sounds so innocent. This is something I tried to bring out in my script. When Joseph was saying about how he didn’t commit the crime I tried to make him sound innocent and then when he was being devious and tipping them off about the evidence, he seems slyer. I also show the impact of violence towards women at the beginning of my film as we see my victim laying on the bed with marks around her neck, implying the fact that there was violence and she would have fought to get away but unfortunately failed. This is similar to The Fall as like I said above Cubitt looked at the idea of violence towards women. One of the reasons why The Fall worked so well was because Cubitt wrote it without thinking about a second season and it just happened later on. He wanted the murder case to be complex not like the majority of the time when there’s violence against women, it’s usually the dad or the boyfriend. When I researched this it showed me that Joseph shouldn’t know the victim and that’s what I stuck with throughout the script.

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